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“Personal statements” for PhD programs after the Supreme Court’s affirmative action decision

MOVING TO FRONT FROM YESTERDAY–MORE DISCUSSION WOULD BE WELCOME

The personal statement for a PhD program typically describes the student's interests and prior work, and makes clear how these make the student a good fit for a particular program.

A young philosopher at a school with a PhD program wrote wondering whether the Supreme Court's decision striking down affirmative action in admissions might (or should) change this.  As the Chief Justice wrote in the majority opinion:

Nothing in this opinion should be construed as prohibiting universities from considering an applicant’s discussion of how race affected his or her life, be it through discrimination, inspiration, or otherwise…A benefit to a student who overcame racial discrimination, for example, must be tied to that student’s courage and determination.  Or a benefit to a student whose heritage or culture motivated him or her to assume a leadership role or attain a particular goal must be tied to that student’s unique ability to contribute to the university.In other words, the student must be treated based on his or her experiences as an individual—not on the basis of race.

Here is how the philosopher who wrote to me put it:

I was just talking to some people recently who were of the view that [PhD application personal statements] should now be more like undergraduate admissions essays, insofar as they should also discuss personal hardship, etc. It struck me that some applicants may be advised to do this, and some not; so I thought it might help for there to be a general discussion of the issue on the most prominent blog in the field.

The background assumption, of course, is that some kind of affirmative action for applicants from underrepresented or disadvantaged backgrounds should still be practiced.  But to do so lawfully at this stage, it will not suffice to note that a candidate is of a particular racial background:  it would require that somewhere in the application that the applicant be able to discuss the factors which the Supreme Court has said are still permissible considerations.

I would like to avoid a discussion of whether affirmative action in PhD admissions is desirable or defensible.  Instead, I would like to hear (and I think my correspondent hoped to hear) what approach should be taken and what advise should be given to undergraduate students. 

My own suggestion is that schools that want to be able to factor in permissible considerations (along the lines sketched by the Chief Justice) should ask for a separate statement "addressing obstacles or life experiences important for the committee to understand in evaluating your educational record" or something like that.  I don't think trying to mix this in with the traditional and core purpose of the statement–namely, describing the applicant's philosophical interests and background, and how they fit with the program being applied to–is a good idea, and will just make the statements harder to write and more confusing to evaluate.  So I would suggest:  create a separate statement that is optional for applicants, but that might supply legally permissible information about an applicant.

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8 responses to ““Personal statements” for PhD programs after the Supreme Court’s affirmative action decision”

  1. Keith Whittington

    In my department, we have seen for several years graduate applicants submitting personal essays that look like undergraduate applications essays. This is essentially never helpful for the applicant, but I suspect it reflects just how deeply ingrained that style of essay is to the current generation of students as well as how imperfect the advising they receive tends to be. I doubt this approach will be any more helpful now.

  2. Professor Whittington, for those who don't know, is in the Politics Department at Princeton. I'd be curious to hear whether readers in other fields have noticed something similar to what he reports. I'd of course also be curious to hear if philosophy faculty have also noticed this.

  3. early career scholar

    (This is not directly related to applications to PhD programs, but rather the creeping ubiquity of the "personal statement")

    I am an early career scholar (non-TT) who applied for several long-term fellowships this year. Among them was an ACLS Fellowship. It's my first time applying, so I don't know if the process has changed in recent years; however, the application package included this requirement: "A brief personal statement of up to one page (double spaced, in Arial or Helvetica 11-point font) describing your intellectual trajectory as a scholar." It seems innocuous enough, but given 1) the fact the ACLS no longer accepts letters of recommendation for this fellowship and 2) one of the selection criteria is the "potential of the award to advance ACLS’s commitment to inclusive excellence, which is based on the principle that humanistic scholarship benefits from institutional diversity and the inclusion of voices that have been historically underrepresented in the academy due to race, gender, class and other aspects of identity", I did feel that the personal statement component was an invitation to talk about hardships and barriers that had accompanied one's "intellectual trajectory."

  4. I have read somewhere around 1500 personal statements accompanying applications to a Philosophy PhD program, and my experience is similar to Keith Whittington's.

  5. That's amazing, and this is obviously prior to the SCOTUS decision. So you have prospective students interested in logic or philosophy of mathematics who are sharing personal stories and experiences? Unbelievable.

  6. One thing that departments can do to help avoid the sorts of counterproductive SOPs described above is to be specific in their SOP prompts about what they're looking for. At GSU, we decided recently to replace our generic prompt with the following (which should be posted shortly):

    "In no more than 800 words, please tell us (a) what your philosophical interests are and what intellectual questions you wish to understand better, (b) which experiences, skills, and philosophical and non-philosophical background will enable you successfully to carry out graduate work on your philosophical interests, and (c) what, in light of these interests and experiences, your reasons are for applying to Georgia State University specifically. You may also include (d) any information that will help to contextualize the materials submitted with your application."

    Now, some people might react, "applicants should already know this," but really, why should they? If you're from a small department that doesn't send many people to grad school, you might never have been clued in to the "secret syllabus" of graduate school.

  7. I'm surprised that anyone is surprised that applicants would treat graduate school personal statements similarly to undergraduate personal essays. The prompts in both cases are very vague, and it's not unreasonable to assume that admissions committees are looking for similar things absent particular coaching to the contrary (which many students will not receive).

  8. This was as the director of the Philosophy PhD. Program from 2014 until 2020, so a small minority of applicants were specifically interested in logic or mathematics. A rather large minority of applicants devoted personal statements to non-academic biographical data. I think the overlap between these minority groups was probably smaller even than statistics predicts.

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